I miss the way things used to be
back then,when you still talked to me
and told me things no one else knew
to tell the truth,I just miss you.
The way you smile when ive made you laugh
the way your nose crinkles when youre mad
the way you look when ive done something dumb
is it any wonder that youre the only one
I can think about,dream about,
wonder what we could have been?
Had it been a different time,a different situation
if you werent with her,if you met me first
would I still be stuck with this curse?
To want what I can never have
but you say your happy,so im glad.
Although I sigh when I think it through
because I will never be with you
Author notes
been a little bit since ive posted anything.um this is about a girl ive fallen inlove with who is with another.seems to be my luck.
Please tell me what you think
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WOW
This is amazing! Haven't heard anything from you in a while. I do have to say though in line 8 you wrote, "...is it no wonder..." do you mean it is? Just wondering. Then in the next line (line 9) you wrote, "...I can think about..." again did you mean can't? It kind of threw me off there and I had to reread it a couple times but otherwise AWESOME!

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Wow this is great i love this it. i hope life is going well for you. i have written new stuff you should go see it.
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Nice
I like this one, its very pure and simple... <3 4 stars


