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Caution

Not one step closer,

closer to the edge,

caution,

my constant companion warned,

not one step closer.

Caution,

weakened by a life of low risk,

suddenly,

as stabbed by a knife,

caution,

heightened to new levels,

not one step closer,

closer to the edge.

Past my face,

reddened by its blazing touch,

the jacketed round

unseen,

action causing reaction,

backword.

Just one step forward,

closer to the edge,

caution wins again,

alive instead of dead.

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  • Parearoo
    March 27

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    Awesome

    This was interesting; I liked it! The emotions you put into words here was enthralling; yet another one of your works that I enjoyed reading!


  • hotchocolate gold member
    February 15
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    This is nicely done and I enjoyed the read! Keep penning hon