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Haiku






Barren nothingness
An abyss of broken lives
By the hand of man

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  • forever dreaming
    March 6

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    Firstly, Im so glad to see that you are back among us. You say a lot in this haiku of a terrible situation at the hands of what can only be described as pure evil. A very powerful, moving piece on the recent tragedy. Excellent xx


  • PerVirtuous
    February 10
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    Powerfully sorrowful.


  • Errant Panther gold member
    February 10

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    very powerful words my friend, It disgusts me that some can be so callous as to deliberately light fires especially when the conditions can make them so terrifyingly destructive.


  • poeticweaver gold member
    February 10

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    Well Done!

    Like the Background, and your poetic words!
    Thanks for sharing, and us men do a stand up job eh?
    Sadly, no, we don't.. Hope we learn someday...
    Way before it's to late. Bravo on this, made me ponder.

    Peace, Timothy


    • PoetsAngel
      February 10
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      Thanks Timothy, it's a picture of the current bushfire situation here in Victoria Aust,
      xxx

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