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Slender Thread

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I'll tell you why I need you
I'll tell you where I've been
You want to know my secrets
You say that you're my friend
But there's a wonder deep within me
A treasure that I hide
A thought that's lost in shadow
A flame that burns inside

CHORUS:

I bend to hear the whisper in the wind
I long to see the flower in a song
I place all my hope on a slender thread
And all I can do - is hold on


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My spirit needs a hero
My heart still needs to mend
Your words are filled with comfort
Yet words still in the end
But there's a thunder deep within me
That words cannot command
Your actions speak the loudest
Is there strength to hold my hand?


CHORUS

Bridge:
But there's a tremble deep within me
I'm not afraid to love again
If I patch the broken pieces
If I give your love a chance...

CHORUS 2:

Will you bend to hear the whisper in the wind?
Will you long to see the flower in a song?
We'll place all our hopes on a slender thread
And all we can do - is hold on

I'll place all my hope on this slender thread
And all I can do
Is hold on...

Author notes

I wrote this song, partly from my heart and partly for my brother's fiance to sing on her first record, if she decides she likes it. I might consider adding a sound byte of me singing it, since I don't have her singing it yet.

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  • Heroesrox silver member
    April 28

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    Awesome. This was very nice. I found myself singing it with my own tune, but I'd the tune you have in mind for it. Best wishes.


  • azlyn gold member
    February 23

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    Lovely song Sister! I would so love to hear your sweet voice singing this!!!

    Blessed Be~
    Azlyn


  • Sirrithia Toranta
    February 11

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    Very Good

    I like it, it will be interesting to hear you sing it once you put it on here. I am sure Dusty's fiance will love it!!! I sure did!!!

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