The salvation of one’s soul, can only be obtained
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with blind eyes and faith, by those with the naked
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beauty and strength within; to help others reach
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for the heavens to touch Gods face.
Author notes
By ~ Maxboy
Picture By ~ "El Vitral" - Julie Bell
Picture Prompt ~ 30~60 Words [ 34 Used ]
In a list
A contest entry
- Help me reach my 2000 comment By entering your poetry by Night Terrors.
400 points, ended May 11, 251 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
~PLEASE COMMENT~
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wow that was amazing short but just plain mind blowing i am going to add you to the finalist list.
The Positives:
So fasinating it really spoke to me I am speechless that was so amaziing
Room For Improvement:
Nothing I can see you did wonderful
My Favorite Part:
beauty and strength within; to help others reach
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for the heavens to touch Gods face
Such a pwerful ending
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I give this an 10/10 you did great. I hope to see you in my future contests thanks so much for entering.
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Thank you so very much for your wonderful comment, I am very pleased you enjoyed my write.
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Great write here. Short, simple and to the point. The image you placed along with the piece really brought out the hidden meaning you have here. Excellent write and good luck in my contest.
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Thank you very much for your great comment, I am glad you liked my write.
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Fantastic!!!! I love this piece!!! It relays a very true message!!! I am a true believer that we must help each other to reach GOD!!!!! Thanks for sharing!!!!!!
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Thank you so much for the applause and your wonderful comment, I am pleased you enjoyed my write.
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excellent
This is perfect my brother
Best of luck in the contest
Hugs n love
Your sis
Susan~~~
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Thank you so much for your wonderful comment sis, I am happy you enjoyed my write.
Huggs & Love To You Sis
Big Bro
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Perfectly penned, and in so few words! You thoughts are warm and uplifting. Beautifully penned hunni, good luck
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Thank you very much for your beautiful comment, I am glad you liked my write.
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A lovely piece in so few words, granting hope beyond the image and thought. Nice write. Thank you for your entry!
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Thank you very much for your wonderful comment, I am pleased you enjoyed my write.
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Simply lovely. You have such an inner gift to pull out the most beautiful words and compose them into a meaningful picture. Phenomenal job!
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Thank you so much Kim for the wonderful comment and compliment, I am pleased you enjoyed my write.
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I love it when someone can take a picture such as this and it it a whole new meaning. Wonderful job with this dear.
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Thank you very much sweetie for the beautiful comment, I am pleased you enjoyed my write.
Thanks Cathy
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Wow!!! A wonderful and very inspirational write sweetie. You speak alot to us with so few words. Your write is perfect for the picture prompt.
Best of luck in the contest hun.
Beautiful~~~~Much Love
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Thank you very much for your wonderful comment, I am pleased you enjoyed my write.
Thanks Luv
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