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I am yours

Laying on the ground
Looking at the stars
Counting every one
Giving each one a reson why I love you
I was doing great
But then i ran out of stars
My love for you is endless
I will love you forever
I would whisper I love you
With my very last breath
I would spend my last senconds with you
Holding you tightly
Me wrapped in your arms
I couldnt think of a more perfect moment
Every time you say I love you
A surge goes throughout my body
So real
So pure
And I know
Within this moment
You are mine
But more importantly
I am yours

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