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Palabra

Enjoy the absence
Savor the silence

For one word will shatter it
And we will be left with pieces
Of this broken moment

Shed your insecurities, disrobe your doubt
Believe in this emptiness
That will save the holy and the devout

One pulse, we all transmute
Into one voice, for the mute

Author notes

Palabra-

1) a word
2) talk; speech.

This is what came to mind when I saw this word.

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  • Judith Chandler
    June 18, 2009
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    Enjoyed this write. Good word choice. Congrats on your bronze.


  • BellaAmare
    March 13, 2009
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    Very interesting. And very thought-provoking.


  • Amythest Moonjade
    February 23, 2009

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    Merry meet,

    Congratulations on your Bronze. I must have read this 5-6 times and each time I a stunned by the simplicity of the message but impressed with depth and power of each line. Congratulations again.


    Amythest


  • Draig aine gold member
    February 22, 2009
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    congradulations on the bronze thingy

    super


  • The Fun House gold member
    February 22, 2009

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    I too dig this piece. I like that it commands your attention from the beginning and keeps it with conviction. A great message to this as well. Bravo!


  • Dragonbabyx3
    February 10, 2009

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    Wow, This is a stunning play of words here! I love the 2nd Stanza! A beautiful and engaging write! I enjoyed this emmensely! Great Job hun!


  • HaileeDear
    February 10, 2009
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    this is deep, and really powerful. I dig it.

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