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Here We Are Again

Here we are again,
Back where it all started.
Stood on the cusp of an unknown,
The breakdown of civilisation,
A return to where we began,
So long ago

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19 - Civilisation

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  • iamthebeatles
    April 5

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    nice deep write. Good use of prompt. I love the length, it says so much with so little. Great.

    cassie


  • TheQueenOfPoetry
    February 10

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    Wow!

    Very beautiful. This poem made me feel good inside and it was filled with many emotions.
    Very nicely done.