the ghastly necropolis
was bathed in a sunless, shadowy
thick layer of idealic fog
a necrophiliacs dream
his smile reaches his eyes
as he peered through the
headstones, looking for hers
pangs of lust overwhelmed him
when he saw the words on
her gravestone: “beloved mother”
his fingers grazed across
the lettering
a sigh of fake remorse
escaped his puckered lips
as he debated his task
he gazed around one last time
before he began the dig
excitement tickled his bones
as the coffin was lifted
and then his corpse bride removed
the opaqueness of her face
and the gaunt black circles
under her starwart eyes
made it all that more
stimulating
as he began his morbid rape
the magnetism exhumed from
their bodies
she may have been dead
but her seductive nature lingered
his vigorous movements only
made him imagine
the sound of her voice
screaming in heaven
of her delight
the course of his pleasure ran
he left her dingy body
to the scavengers
this poem is meant to show how disgusting necrophilia is and not to promote it. i know people who have these tendencies and wrote this to cope
Author notes
I wrote this to cope. may not seem like it but it helped me out
before this was called morbid rape.
This was a nightmare I had... I was the dead woman
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needs puncuation..
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Very dark.
This would be a horrible nightmare. I am so sorry...I have had dreams like this before, they pretty much suck, everytime.
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This poem was intimately macabre, but oh so fascinating at the same time. Well done!
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Twisted, shocking, slightly creepy, but I loved it none the less. A very well written piece. The imagery was fantastic. Great write.
JS
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Thank you
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You know people who have these tendencies....?
Stay far away from them.....
the actual piece was written well but the subject matter was to overpowering ...
You have to get new friends lass...lol
I am going to applaud this for....originality and and an all to real visual to this topic.
Peace,
Lowell
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Yeah Very twisted from my normal stuff it came from nightmares and college students. In my nightmare I was the dead woman... it was super creepy
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agh, its not often that a poem makes me slightly nauseus, you did a really nice job capturing it. if you can make my stomach turn, you did an excellent job.
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Yeah it made mine churn just writing it
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Ah what a gross idea... but so well written, to me, it shows how irrational grief can be sometimes. I think you have a way with words and its got some great imagery Thanks for entering.
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thank you for your read
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Hey my name is Nelena, I am your contest co-host.
Wow...firstly...let me just let it out.ewwwwwwwwwwwwwww. Ok, now that that's finished...One question, you actually know people with these tendencies? How....disgusting. But the poem was written quite well...Actually put me there, unfortunately
Great job!
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yeah i met some strange people in college. they inspired this morbid write
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Ah..what a thought you weaved and made a touching poetry with it as well..very strong voicve is here and very sharp immages are there to bring the efect...
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CREEPY!
this is creepy in an oddly satisfying way. i appreciate the darkness...very good write...i hope you can cope...best wishes!
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yes it is very creepy i agree. i dare not change it though. its my way of coping with bad situations... write a dark poem. thanks for the read
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MWA HA HA HA!!!! This made me recoil with satisfaction. Thanks for sharing this, a very... dark write. well done, poet!!!
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thanks. i write well done stuff every now and again
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Mann I just love your work. ~Speechless!
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Thanks. what can i say i have a bit of a dark soul at times. thank you for reading this
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scary pretty
I really do like this. Scares me people actually do this. YUCK! lol I do loce this.
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yeah some ppl have issues
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darkly deep
so true it's these kind of writes that seem to offer consolation ... or something like that
~teddybare~
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yeah
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holly shit lol i love it
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