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The Marching Clone (Replica)


Starvation of an afterthought,
encroachment leaving signs,
signals, portents of a facsimile;
renditioned thoughts captured,
my own originality pillaged.

Replacement with a construct,
a replica of lost creativity,
clones marching single file,
feeble army advancing until
inspiration strikes them down.


Author notes


Prompt: Write a poem of ten lines or less using a seven letter word beginning with the letter 'R'.
Word Chosen: Replica

This piece is about being stuck in a rut creatively and how sometimes no matter what you write, it seems you have gotten stuck on writing on the same subject, or using the same words or ideas, so each piece seems to be like a little replica or clone of the one that went before.

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  • The Fun House silver member
    February 22

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    I agree, very original and also well done. I love it when someone steps outside the proverbial box and runs with it. Bravo!

  • Judith Chandler
    February 18
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    An original take on the prompt.


  • Beautiful-N-Broken gold member
    February 10

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    I like this a lot. I tend to write about the same things over and over. If only I would expand my vocabulary....Great write!