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Metamorphosis

 


Observe the metamorphosis
of caterpillar to butterfly
silver dust on sapphire
while dragon sleeps –
one purple eye half open
caged with words
his furled wings

wrapped around him

                             like daisy-chains

Such creatures!
Fast-beating hearts
and thoughts that intersect
shooting heavenward
in barrages of milky starlight…
I watch from the dark of my room
like a proud mother
beholding her brood

Scattering bread onto the grass
waiting for them to return
at dusk and dawn
so young
setting off to face the world
in the green-gold days of summer
                     that vanish like a forgiving past





















Metamorphosis
©crisstiena
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Author notes

Wild Butterflies, Caged Dragons... A Coming-out for Blue Kin

“We sometimes encounter
beings who seem to us
impossible…”

~ Leonard Cohen

Image by misstressofspam@deviatArt

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  • jcat gold member
    February 16

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    Literally I think my jaw cracked my keyboard when it fell open....What an incredible write!!! This was so gorgeous from beginning to end...Superb imagery!! Should be painted on a childs wall.....Just wonderful!!


  • kaibab silver member
    February 15
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    Such a breathing verse of resurrecting wing...congrats to you...


  • Blue Rew silver member
    February 10
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    This write holds so much magic for me....
    The delicate use of colour and texture to
    bring to life an entire atmosphere of feeling,
    that being one of a dreamscape. Milkyways,
    daisy chains and passing summer days...
    Each stanza offers something for the senses.
    Thank-you sincerely. Blue


  • Night Hope gold member
    February 10
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    So, Darlin'...Where'd ya meet Lenny at???