A guy who was singing while screwing,
Lost the gist of just what he was doing,
His poor ladyfriend
Is now on the mend
But I think she's considering suing.
Poor Death, who got kicked in the ass,
Tried his best to help out the poor lass,
But not being lithe
He shouldered his scythe
And intoned, "Sadly, all things must pass.."
A contest entry
- Rolling With Charlie by Dalaney.
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i enjoyed this, stood out a lot to me and i just enjoyed reading it
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The first two lines got me very excited but it didn't last. A bit like sex, really. I was hoping the first limerick would end with "poo-ing".....
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A spot-on couple of limericks, my friend, and a great take on Bukowski's quote.
Best of luck,
Bill
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lol..love a good limerick
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Poor death
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Is this a limerick? If it is, or not, it's my new fave. Good Stuff!
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!!! Well let that be a lesson to us all!!! xx
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