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Love Is Ours

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The moon's reflectivity is a tenderness of beams,

caressive whispers dance among the stars.

A treasure of sapphires, rubies and emeralds,

stops time, making all that surrounds us ours.

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Together we join hands and walk the sandy shore,

God's creations guide every step that we take.

Upon a blanket we sit to count the diamonds in the sky,

falling asleep in each others arms till morning we wake.

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We are a living fantasy, our hearts replete with love,

happiness coalesces with the joy we'll forever share.

Love is ours to last into eternity,

we need only be true to one another and always care.

~

 

 

 

 

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  • drifting cloud silver member
    April 11, 2009
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    This is a beautiful poem, a delight to read. Your talent shines here.


  • Desire gold member
    February 11, 2009

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    Wow~

    Aaaaaaaaaaaaw This is a Beauty of a piece penned and what imagery also emotions~ First stanza grabs-tugs- weaves with Precious words~ Excellent this is Love this!!
    Congratulations on Your Trophy win!
    -Throws confetti-
    Woooooooooo Hoooooooooooo


    Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
    Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
    Best wishes too
    with much love & light~ Desire~*~


  • Draig aine gold member
    February 11, 2009
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    congratulations on the bronze

    well done indeed!!


  • Riftkin gold member
    February 11, 2009

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    This is a wonderful poem.. and I am glad you
    brought it to my contest.

    Best of luck to you with it.

    Riftkin


  • Frogzter gold member
    February 10, 2009

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    This is a stunning piece my friend. It is what real poetry is all about. My pleasure for having absorbed this one.

    Blessings,

    Frogz~

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