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Sore Knees

a prayer is in
us all...

and when life brings us
to our knees
we are in position,
to say them

so-
I grab a bottle from
the table;
      hum a few bars

        and as I plug her
her unholy hole
 
      thank god-
              I didn’t go blind

             


Author notes

"Sexual intercourse is kicking death in the ass while singing."
Charles bukowski

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  • Naughtygrlred
    February 23
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    I hear that that...


  • Jersene gold member
    February 18
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    this is great...enjoyed reading


  • valentina
    February 17
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    this is good.


  • BehindTheShadow
    February 10
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    This is great. Thanks!


  • Luna Tique Fringe
    February 10
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    hehe..love it Mal


  • Dalaney gold member
    February 10
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    thank God for small miracles


  • afroqban
    February 10
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    HAA yeah be thankful! this is great, i love it


  • delightfulmess silver member
    February 10

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    hehe... Nice!!...
    Well done A love poetry that leaves me with a


    Delila


  • usefuldistraction
    February 10

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    "a prayer is in us all", "I thank god I didn't go blind" two initiations to manhood! Great writing!


    • Malabu
      February 10
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      strange... how life brings us full circle thanks for the comment
      mal

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