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I need a lover



because sometimes, even under the covers,
these nights are too damn cold to sleep alone
when I sleep, I sometime dream of you,
floating above me
I wake to the dawn, and the sun flooding
over the lawn
I could use the gentle touch
of a lover
the kiss on my shoulder

I need a lover

because sometimes, even when the radio is on,
driving alone isn't that much fun
when I think, I sometimes picture you next to me
your head resting on my shoulder
I rub the back of my neck
and I sigh.
I could use the gentle touch
of a lover
the kiss on my bare shoulder

I need a lover

I need you're touch,
you're sent,
you're smile,
you're voice
you're presence.

I need a lover.



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  • erica
    August 14, 2009
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    i agree with TwilightOfOurLives
    <3luv the poem <3 =]


  • Reanna Eryn
    March 12, 2009
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    I know how you feel; those emotions are the most painful of them all. Dear, you'll find the one that will love you soon enough. With your ability to write, I know you'll be able to do anything you put your mind into. I feel in love with this poem (and with the person who wrote it), so anyone human enough would fall in love too.


    • Raven De Winter
      March 12, 2009
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      Wow, thank you so much for your amazing comment. Thank you for your insight, I really enjoyed hearing that, lol. And falling in love with me through this poem is really flattering lol.
      Thanks again
      -Raven


  • SunshineForTheVamps
    March 11, 2009

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    wow this is strong and I know the feeling...the silence scares me alot and you feel empty and cold...sometimes we all need just one person to love...