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Coffee is Love


Coffee can be sweet or bitter, have other things added or taken straight, smooth or strong
Coffee can be savored or shared, it can take long to brew or be instant.
Coffee is not liked by all in any one form, some can only take it as an addition to something already enjoyed

Coffee is grown, and tended with the greatest of care
Coffee is green at first and takes time to ripen and mature
Coffee in its raw form alone is not desirable

Coffee can bring you up when your down and low
Coffee can warm you when your cold
Coffee can be addictive

Coffee can be found all over the world, refined or course
Coffee is the same yet different in the way its taken or cherished by all
Coffee when thought about with these words of simplicity sounds allot like Love.

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  • Immortal Obscurity Greeters member
    February 11

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    Welcome to Allpoetry

    I agree, and I can completely relate to your words. I've discovered, over the course of my late teens and early 20s (infinite wisdom ), that love takes work. It's not all flowery, gushy, and sappy, like we see in the movies; it's raw, violently-passionate, and emotional, and you're right; it IS addictive too

    Just a tip: Be careful not to overdo the filler-words. "Coffee is/can..." at the beginning of every sentence is unnecessary and obstructs your flow a little. Possibly consider rephrasing to something a little softer and less intrusive

    Well done, and I look forward to reading more of your poems Keep up the good work!

    Laura
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  • Bruce silver member
    February 10
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    Very cute! Now we know why Starbucks does such a booming business! Well done!