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youarebeautifulyouareeverythingthatiwanteverythingineedeverythingiwishiwas
youmakemedreamlaughcrysighscreamidontwantyoutoeverleavemeidontfeellike
ihaveanythingtoofferyoubecauseyouaresurelyperfecticantwaittomakeyouminef
oreverevenifthatcanonlybeinmyheadyoumaketheworldturnformemakethesunris
eandsetandiwouldgiveanythingtomakeyoufeelthesamewayaboutmeiamabjectly
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fmischiefyouaremybestfriendyoumakemefeelthewayeverystupidlovesongsaysth
atyoushouldyoufillmewithwarmthandsmilesyoufillmewiththeworstkindsofangera
ndfearyoumaketheentirerangeofhumanemotionsfloodthroughmelikenoothercan


i love you


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ordstotrulycaptureallthesubtletiesofyourexistenceanditseffectonmeyourlovingd
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nysparkofdivinityinsideofyouiamnotafraidtoshowyoumyuglinessmyinsecuritiesb
ecauseiknowthatyouarehumantooandihavefaithinyourcompassionihavefaithiny
ouevenifihavenoroomforfaithanywhereelseiwillforgiveyouforanythingandiwillne
veraskforforgivenessiwillgiveyoueverypieceofmethaticaneventhebrokenpieces


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  • Grey
    March 20, 2009
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    I want to be like you... so I'm writing this afterthought and wondering if you'll ever find it randomly, someday.

    This was for you. I love you.


  • Annexed Josephine
    March 17, 2009

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    it is like being in love in lust infatuated obsessed. it runs together and it's frustrating to understand even when you're the one experiencing it. maybe i'm way off which is usual. i love this a lot and relate to it a lot as well. thank you.


  • decode
    March 16, 2009

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    I like the "subtleties of your existence" bit.
    just... wow. this has so much passion and fervor, even if it did all run together. I think that just emphasizes it more.

    lovely. <3


  • Chainsaw
    February 16, 2009

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    You are so incredible. This broke my heart. It's so touching. If I was her/him, I would cry.

    I love what you've done with this too - titling it "black" and then making EVERYTHING black... It makes it feel like a secret that I was never meant to be allowed to read.


  • charcoal
    February 10, 2009
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    and i had to read it (:

  • Asabouros.
    February 10, 2009
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    wow.

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