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Town Barbarian

barbaric man gone bankrupt
decides to become a bandit
hell bent on robbing the bank

bearded he took a razor,
barefaced, gathered his
artillery barrage, preparation

took him an entire day
a back breaking barricade,
beside himself he took a breath

he robbed the bank with bangs
from the battalion of bedlam,
bag in one hand, beer in the other

dodging from bullets
they heard him bellow,
"you dirty old bastards"

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Had some fun with this one lol

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  • alpPDCjr12
    April 1
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    lol very funny, nice job.


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    February 23
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    LMAO
    well done. This was fricken funny.

    Good luck in the contest

    passions


  • ennovy silver member
    February 23
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    Excellent imagery I wish it was a bit longer.........thank you for entering...novy


  • Kristin103161
    February 11
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    This is very good!!!

    All you need in this poem is BONNIE!!!!!