One night,
while tripping on acid,
I came to a world so placid,
I left part of myself behind.
When I have a really bad day,
I just float up and away,
and go there... in my mind.
Raindrops hold rainbows,
at nighttime the sun glows,
and all of the trees talk.
Colors twist and swirl,
it's a beautiful world,
in which I love to walk.
When my final day nears,
without any fears,
I'll drop a hit once more.
As I drift to next plane,
with colors....insane,
maybe I'll know what life's for!
A contest entry
- That is some deep sh** by once.
650 points, ended February 14, 38 entries
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oh shit yeah!
this is deep, deep shit that is. i like the rhymes and the flow. with all the depressing writing thats on this site its nice to hear "its a beautiful world" even if the world is in your mind
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Lovely imagery my friend.
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well this certaintly is so deep Sh-- and it rocks the boat of good sh--. you know how to rock that rhyme scheme that's for sure. my best to you in the contest.
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I love the intricate rhyme. Very deep, very descriptive of what I hope is not.....................
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As I drift to next plane,
with colors....insane,
maybe I'll know what life's for!
insanely cool write. good luck in the contest
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