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I Love You

Listen to me,
Now I was talking to her
I'll admit that,
She was worth all the words
A secret turned into a lifetime of love
A day full of smiles, roses and Sun
Sweet lullabies in her ear of delight
It was all a teasing matter,
but we felt connected as such

And one day
The look in her said "I love you"
Staring at me...Then I saw my wife.
Now don't look at me like that
My guilt lies only in respect wishes.
I promised on her deathbed
I would not wed another misses
Now I don't know about other men,
But my word is all I am see

And she's been lonely when I'm around
Trying to fight it
I walk past her everday
Hiding the longing to suck her ear
Taste the jasmine on her neck
Pass the thought of mind sex
Let's make wishes happen
Spread the bones apart…let's have at it
With wishbone action

Well, one day she came to say
"I'm tired, Listen to me,
I love you like
Flower's, and perfect bra's
Like beauty marks that make me stand apart.
I love you like I love my body
When I look in the mirror naked at night"

Now I was excited, getting hard thinking of the sight
"Glistening in wetness from the cold shower
Your sweet nothings left me with,
Nothing but desire and aching…
Now I'm tired of your missing in action passion.
What keeps you from taking me?
What keeps you from losing yourself in me
And I from receiving you fully, huggin' you in tight?"
All I could say was, "Baby I promised."
But Lord knows I wanted...so bad

Now I'm a man of my word
Lord knows my flesh is weak
And right there in the midst of light
Sun shining and blinding
Subliming, sensually sensitizing
We to became, under the rays of Sun.
To my wife I whisper "Hope you understand"
To her I said, "I Love You"

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  • black thought
    August 16
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    anotha dope one bro

    -black thouqht


  • Pain Angel
    March 30
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    Spread the bones apart…let's have at it
    With wishbone action

    hahahahahahaha!!!! had to reasd that part to my friend lol


    anywho... in the last stanza, are you saying you cheated? or are you saying you started doing the do with wishbone action? lol i am a little confused... but that was such a great poem. i am sorry i havent commented lately, school is so hard now a days.


  • blueyez
    February 10

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    I so loved this write... you were very sincere, seductive, romantic and sexy all at once! Very well penned