Slowly my fingers
draws love on your soft cheek.
You smile in a shy way.
Who could not love you
Your beauty is a spring day
full of blue birds singing songs
Deep and powerful;
are the emotions I feel,
a thunderstorm in full force
Sensation of touch
permeating into me
by contact of lips.
I become a wave
and you become a sea shell
resounding sighs of passion.
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Comments
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ehh.. kind of sucky.
:/
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Most of this didn't really strike me as anything profound, but the last stanza was unique and interesting.
"I become a wave
and you become a sea shell
resounding sighs of passion."
I like the metaphors you used. It makes for a nice ending. However, I wish you would've written in that fashion throughout the whole poem.. -
Nice
How lucky is the woman/women you have feelings for
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