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Black tears

Her cheeks ran black
as the world covered themselves
in pink roses.





Smiled with fake hope.
only wanted you.







Author notes

Meh. Was for a contest. Didn't count the words right. Still liked it though. *shrugs*

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  • Miss Faerie Greeters member
    March 28

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    Hoodwinked!

    Fake hope. Something that people can find easily and put on with a fake smile.

    It's hard to let go of what we want, and what we need when we don't have it.

    I'm sorry I am late with the hoodwink, but hope you are glad for more comments!

    Shari


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    February 20

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    Humm,very thought proovking immagery with a strong impact to open the truth of this life..thanks for sharing it..


  • Dragonbabyx3
    February 9

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    I really enjoyed this piece, it was full of longing and heart break (at least thats what I got from it anyway!) A Stunning write sweetie!


  • Merry Christmas
    February 9

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    It's only 17 words. Which means that sorry, I can't give it a trophy.

    Besides, you wrote about Valentines Day, and at the moment I am hating on Valentines Day, on all aspects of it.


  • Riftkin gold member
    February 9
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    This is nicely done and so full of feelings.
    best of luck to you with it.


  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    February 9
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    good luck sweetie..

    mommy

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