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Relief

pain shooting up my back
surrounding my spine
aching, pulsating.

my sweet candies
I can't find them
[unreachable]
and my bottle of liquid sugar
oh it's been empty
for such a long while.

must cure this...
this horrific pain.
have to heal this
must
f
i
n
d
relief.

whatchu think? :D

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