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Little Miss

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With the Internet
these
tiny little hands
in this wide-world expand

Gentle lips turned up in a bow
blowing kisses from this little miss.
we all know.

 

With candid Bliss
I stole from her one little
kiss.

Beauty, Joy and Peace
can exists when we
remember this sweet little miss.
Eyes of fiery coal stare right into my very soul.


May Gods Word Spread Out
as he holds us in the palm of his hand.

Author notes

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Mountain - woman inspire by her contest that ended today.

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  • words-n-stuff gold member
    January 8

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    Heartfelt

    "With the Internet
    these
    tiny little hands
    in this wide-world expand

    "With candid Bliss
    I stole from her one little
    kiss." .................

    A very positive take on the world wide web ... it takes away the darker side of technology !

    I didn't notice this piece before ... I'm glad I found it !

    Cyber hug




  • Gabriel 848
    April 8, 2009

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    ironic that we talked about the net yestday its use and likness to a fantasy then here you are written 1 and a beautiful peace


    • guardianhost gold member
      April 8, 2009
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      With the world today we can cross all barriers

      The internet can be as beautiful as you would have it to be ...in reality or fantasy.
      I know that love is out there sometimes as a friend or brother, It is all in the way we decide to use this gift.


  • Princess-Petunia
    February 16, 2009

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    lovely

    what a wonderful picture all full of colour with a child in the middle,she has a haunting look that draws you in and such a lovely sentiment to your poem.we are in deed, all in Gods hand.

    • guardianhost gold member
      February 17, 2009
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      Thank you for reading me and commenting.

      The internet can be used for so much good - we have such a wonderful gift.


  • Wandering Woodchuck gold member
    February 9, 2009
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    Nice job. I like the thoughts behind the words in your poem. It is a great poem.

    Mike


    • guardianhost gold member
      February 17, 2009
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      Sincerely - Thank You

      Your comment left me to pause ...then my ego began to grow. You are the Teacher Sir, I am still learning from you. Thank you Mike for encouraging me.
      Respectfully Yours,
      Cheryl

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