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I'm Sorry

Sometimes I feel that I'm nothing but a bother
to you, keep telling me that I'm not but now
do I truely know for sure, not trying to make you
mad or anything, you just have a way of saying I'm
nothing but a bother.

Always playing videos games, why am I always left
out with what your doing, maybe it's just me, maybe
I'm going crazy, please tell me why I feel this way,
please tell me that I'm all wrong.

I'm sorry if I feel like this, I don't mean to
make you mad or anything, I'm just telling you how
I feel, like you have always told me, tell me how
you truely feel, don't hold back.

What am I doing wrong, please don't tell me nothing
I know your not saying the truth, if you don't like
me or what I'm doing don't hide it, let me know
I'll do my best to fix my mistakes.

Tough patch in the marriage

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