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Shoot Me

Just shoot me please
how can I stay here
wehre I'm being callled
a hoe by my moms
friend, my mom said
she didn't hear it but
it's ok.

No family or friends
who do I go to
when I'm talking
this way, man why
am I still alive and
writting this poem.

Somebody just please
help me out with
what I'm going through,
I don't know what to
do anymore with several
people saying I'm no good.

I could just do it
myself and have no
help, man do I really
have a place to call home anymore,
with whats going on.

Man oh man why
do I care how
I should die or
do I not and
just want to get
it all over with.

Does anyone want me
around, or are they
playing jokes to make
me think they want
me around, if playing
games why play just
say you don't want
me around.

Maybe god can
answer my call
and help me
out but who
really knows,
but I just ask
this one thing
just take me out
of this world.

This was a very dark time for me.

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