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Anonymous

I've lost touch with my faith in humanity
surrounded by the anonymity of ones and zeros
no contact outside fingers to keys
who am i?
where is your god now, to tell me that I am one?
do you even know who you are anymore?
tell me, does it hurt?
these self imposed bubbles we hide ourselves away in
feebly scratching at the glass of our cages
hoping someone out there knows better what's best for us
these eternal lies crush us from the inside out
and I'm stuck here
fighting my way out of your paper bag
suffocating on my own disappointment

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  • Lady Voldemort silver member
    February 9
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    You finally posted it!! Yay


    • pointlessdayz
      February 10
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      haha... I went through my phone and typed up all the stuff that I have written while not at a computer and posted some of it. There was a lot.