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From Angry Lovers

 

 

 

 

      focused rays

 

       slice loose souls.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

A contest entry

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    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
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  • Luciferschild
    February 9

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    interesting, the image was wonderful and even though it was vague it was vague in a nuance kind of way. thank you for entering and good luck


    • SoldierOfTheCross
      February 9
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      thanks for the comment.
      Try reading it again with the title as part of the poem-
      it makes more sence.