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Will You Be My Valentine

We’ll swing all day long
Sometimes you may push me
And then I’ll pull you, closer
And far in the sky,

And we will drink milk
From the same glass

We’ll play ‘Skippy’ stones
If you fell down, oh-ho
I’ll beat the ground
And make it cry, until
You laugh.

And if I fell down, then
You can laugh, until
Your teeth make me
Laugh.

We’ll also brush our teeth
To let us eat chocolates
The whole year, I know
You love them

So I’ll just drive myself
In my neighbor lake
Of chocolate and then
I’ll kiss you, every time
You want a chocolate.

So you see, you be my Barbie
And I’ll be you Rambo,

Will you be my Valentine?

Author notes

I have written something after an age... Last I wrote on 10th December, since then life has been so harsh that I had lost my muse. But the pic, oh its so sweet I got my must back...!! Thanks..!!

and I all my poems italicised, hope you don't mind that.

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  • Polaja Greeters member
    February 14

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    This is a beautiful Valentine poem I really like that you have such a lovely view on life - I'm glad your muse came back!



    Polly


  • poet2angels gold member
    February 10

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    This is a sweet story and a lovely piece. I am happy you liked the pic and it got your muse back!

    Lynda