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Reflection on a Tough Day

Living in the life I'm living in,
Day-to-day life can be easy or hard.
Sometimes I feel I could run a mile,
Other times I can barely walk a yard.

Author notes

This is another song, but this is the first verse. I can't exactly put up the chorus or more verses, because they aren't exactly written yet

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  • MagicElves
    March 14, 2009

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    wow really tell you the truth some I feel like that sometime I want to run more then a mile although but sometimes I want to be the world lazy person or that I never live in this world.


  • HugsForEveryone
    March 11, 2009
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    Wow, this was really good! Again, you are really good with the rhyming. It would be nice if you added some, I didn't feel like it was finished yet, hence the author's notes. Good luck with finishing it, if you need any help thinking up ideas tell me and I would be glad to help you.
    ~Kera


  • WickedlyCedrone
    February 26, 2009
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    LOVE IT!


  • crackerjackie
    February 11, 2009
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    Thank you you're the first one that's commented on this besides me!!!

  • twilightluvr4ever
    February 11, 2009
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    YAAAY!!!!!

    It's really really good!

  • crackerjackie
    February 10, 2009
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    Why has no one read this one???

  • crackerjackie
    February 9, 2009
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    Please Comment!

    Please comment on this one...I want to know what people think...

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