the hands on the clock won't move any faster,
right now, though, pain seems to be my master.
sorry and regretting all the things i said,
can't it all go away once i lay in bed?
i hope it will and know it won't
i'll make it better in a moment.
just one more chance, i don't deserve.
i say way too many mean, harsh words.
forgive me and i'll show you just what i can do
to put that radiating happiness back inside of you.
Author notes
I wrote this poem because I've been a real jerk to my boyfriend and hoping to make him feel better and let him see that I'm sorry for it.
Comments
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Fail.
Ten days after this, he left me. Even though things were improving. :| -
Great.
I loved how you used "radiating" in the end. Great job.

