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sorry, baby. written on: 2-9-09.

the hands on the clock won't move any faster,
right now, though, pain seems to be my master.


sorry and regretting all the things i said,
can't it all go away once i lay in bed?

i hope it will and know it won't
i'll make it better in a moment.


just one more chance, i don't deserve.
i say way too many mean, harsh words.


forgive me and i'll show you just what i can do
to put that radiating happiness back inside of you.

Author notes

I wrote this poem because I've been a real jerk to my boyfriend and hoping to make him feel better and let him see that I'm sorry for it.

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  • LeVenin
    July 24, 2009
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    Fail.

    Ten days after this, he left me. Even though things were improving. :|

  • BassXRocker
    April 27, 2009
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    Great.

    I loved how you used "radiating" in the end. Great job.