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I Will Think Of You

(Verse 1) When I hear the crack of a baseball bat,
              and I see the ball fly through the air,
              when I see the fielder hold out his glove,
              and then I hear the crowd cheer,

(Chorus)  I will think of you,
              I could never forget you,
              even for a moment.
              All that I do,
              reminds me of you,
              so when I think of this,
              I will think of you.

(Verse 2) When I am frustrated,
              and life gets me down,
              you help me get through,
              'cause I know you're around.
              When I have a bad day,
              and no one seems to care,
              I know that it will be okay,
              because you are there.

(Chorus)  I will think of you,
              I could never forget you,
              even for a moment.
              All that I do,
              reminds me of you,
              so when I think of this,
              I will think of you.

(Bridge)  I miss you so,
              and I wish you still could be,
              but I know
              it'll be okay,
              'cause you're watching over me.

(Chorus)  I will think of you,
              I could never forget you,
              even for a moment.
              All that I do,
              reminds me of you,
              so when I think of this,
              I will think of you.

Author notes

This is the song that I wrote. The second verse is a whole different poem under the title "It's Okay", but I thought it would be cool to put the whole song on here.

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Comments

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  • HugsForEveryone
    March 11, 2009

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    I loved the rhyme in this one!! It was really nice and made me feel all warm and fuzzy inside xD
    Nice job on this one,
    Can you possibly explain the baseball analogy to me? (First verse)
    ~Kera


  • WickedlyCedrone
    February 26, 2009
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    OMD LOVE IT!


  • crackerjackie
    February 10, 2009
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    It is put to music, and thank you for the vote of confidence I find it easy to write about topics that are close to my heart

  • HollyLouise
    February 10, 2009

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    wow

    Wow, you should definitely put this to music! it's beautifully written. i am hopeless with lyrics so I congratulate you!! These are so inspirational, considering how young you are.

    Keep writing,
    Holly.


  • crackerjackie
    February 9, 2009
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    Thanks, Bruce!

    Thank you, once again, for commenting. I appreciate your comments and feedback helps me become a better writer


  • Bruce silver member
    February 9, 2009

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    I liked it! The first stanza is especially good! It's very visual - that's what readers like.

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