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It's Okay

When I am frustrated,
and life gets me down,
you help me get through,
'cause I know you're around.
When I have a bad day,
and no one seems to care,
I know that it will be okay,
because you are there.

Author notes

This poem is the bridge to a song I wrote about my friend Eli who is now up in heaven. I think he would be honored to know that this is about him.

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  • HugsForEveryone
    March 11, 2009

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    awwww heartwarming!
    Your author's notes are really sad and I hope you're okay. I read the song with this verse in it and it was really good. ^_^
    ~Kera


  • WickedlyCedrone
    February 26, 2009
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    loved it


  • crackerjackie
    February 10, 2009
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    I did post the song...look for it and once you've read it, please comment!!!


  • cupcakealia
    February 10, 2009
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    nice..waititng for the song


  • crackerjackie
    February 9, 2009
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    The Song

    I am going to post the song...look for it in a few days with the title "I Will Think Of You" (A few days maximum-I might be able to do it today)


  • Bruce silver member
    February 9, 2009
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    I think it would make a fine song. Do post it.


  • crackerjackie
    February 9, 2009
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    P.S. Another Author Note

    The song was entitled "I Will Think Of You" and if I get a request I will post the whole song as a new poem. Please let me know if you want me to do that.

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