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---{14th}---

                                h-h-h-hold it hun
let's just stop it with the lies, the
        sacc|har|ine sweet that turns to a.c.i.d on my lips
eating away at the fleshy underpart of ravaged lips like a bucketful of leeches
&& sucking out all the crimson lipstick
        the kind that's on sale at Kohl's for just
                      $3.99

spun gold isn't anymore substantial than sunlight;
pretty to look at (to look at) (to look at)
but just try to                    and
              ______touch______

                                              p.o.u.f

like iridescent bubbles blown of childsplay and fairytale dreams

see,
  in fairy tales
            the knight always slays the dragon
                  and gets the princess in the end
                        riding off into the sunset
                              like some cheesy cinema flick
                                  except that's the point isn't it?

well so i paid my ($$$)
but come on in    i : n : s : p : e : c :t : o : r
cuz i think i've been c^c^cheated
                                my "knight in shining armor?"
turned out to be the dragon's brother
  just look at all the -- s.c.a.l.e.s...

hiding under that pretty
      &&aluminum foil&&....
{all you have to do is give a good hard shove}
              and cr-r-r-r-r-unch...

and ba-ba-ba-ba-by
you can say whatever the hell you want

      --stupid paper machie hearts that get torn up and flutter like lost confetti so lonely in the back alley where no one's ever going to make out again, oh.no.no.no--

but the 14th is going d
                                    o
                                        w
                                          n...

(bitches, let's go!)

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  • Still Standing gold member
    February 9

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    LOOOOVE IT!!

    I love this so much!!!! My favorite part is:

    cuz i think i've been c^c^cheated
    my "knight in shining armor?"
    turned out to be the dragon's brother
    just look at all the -- s.c.a.l.e.s...


    Now that is how I'm feeling right now KUDOS!!!!

    Thanks for entering and Good luck!!!