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Fading Purity

Hate reigns.
Horror consumes.
Harsh reality rules.

Our beautiful love,
The world pure.

This horrid fate,
The world polluted.

You.

Author notes

Once again a poem that's a bit obscure...

Prompt: Dirty Snow.

Dirty snow isn't exactly in the poem - but it was my inspiration.

20 words.

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  • Salty Hibiscus gold member
    February 12

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    inspiring take on the prompt, and well yeah everything is polluted, so does the dirty snow. thanks for entering. good luck.


  • ScarletO gold member
    February 10
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    The world certainly does pollute the snow and the mind as well.