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Who Is This Child?

Sitting in the corner
She's tryin' to remember
Why she was here yesterday.

No where to run to
No one to go to
She's all alone.

Who is this child
That I speak of
And why was she left here to die?

Its rainin' here
On a December mornin'
And he was just thrown out.

Bein' disowned
On the day he was born
And he has no where to run.

Who is this child
That I spead of
And why was he disowned tonight?

These are the children
That need a home
So who will take them in?

Some one with a lovin' heart
Will see that children
Need a lovin' home within.

So who will save them?
From the cold and
Who will take them in?

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  • iamthebeatles
    February 14

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    this is really sad :,( then end is almost hopeful! I would sound great as a song I think. Good job! Inspiring write.

    cassie