You say that you love me
then break my heart in bits
You say that you need me
then you call it quits
You say that you want me
but you don't want me at all
You say that you'll help me
but you just watch me fall
You say that you'll do anything
but will anything do
You say that you can't live without me
oh you know thats not true
You say that you will care for me
I know thats a lie
You put your arms around me
don't even try
I pack my bags
You say don't go
i walk out the door
there is no more love to show
You scream after me
as I walk away
I try to forget
it's a brand new day
A contest entry
- ~Through With Love~ by Still Standing.
1500 points, ended February 24, 41 entries
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I love love love this! Its so true. I know what it feels like to be in a position similiar to that. Really well written!
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Very emotional.. love the styl and flow of the words...
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Good Job
Forgetting is so hard to do!!!! I like the part:
You say that you love me
then break my heart in bits
You say that you need me
then you call it quits
Great job thanks for entering and good luck'!!!!
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