chances lost,
hearts broken,
words spoken in hurt,
time goes by,
she grows up,
he falls back in love,
she has moved on,
got married,
started a new life,
renewed fires,
a kiss of passion,
a kiss of pain,
she ends confused,
he is in love.......
He pulls me into the dangerous love dance.....
He believes that one day I will be his....
He sends flowers,
he sends cards,
he vows that one day we will be together.
chances lost,
hearts broken,
words spoken in hurt,
time goes by,
she grows up,
he falls back in love,
she has moved on,
got married,
started a new life,
renewed fires,
a kiss of passion,
a kiss of pain,
she ends confused,
he is in love.......
He pulls me into the dangerous love dance.....
He believes that one day I will be his....
He just wants me to be happy,
yet he sends flowers, cards, and calls all the time.
Why can't he just leave me alone, Hasn't he hurt me enough.
Author notes
I'm not looking for someone to tell me what I should do.. God and time will help me with that. I just want for everyone to know where the feelings came from.
This is a write of the thoughts and feelings I had, and have. I was engaged to a young man who had moved to my home town for an exchange, and never went back to his home. He went back to pack and fell in love with his x-gf. They decided to get married right there and then. I call him to see when he was coming home and she answered the phone telling me to back the F-off and to leave him alone... So I did. I went on with my life... I met an amazing man I feel in-love with and we got married. Now only 5 month into our marriage, the man that broke my heart starts to call, and text me like 30 times today. I really did love him with all my heart and it hurts to have him still so much in love with me... When I love someone else...
What did you think
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That's a really strange situation and it sounds completely heart-wrenching.. I could stil relate to some of your words, though, at the beginning... anyway, I enjoyed this write.
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i like this one so much that i decided i needed to tell you again!! i just love it so much!!!!
ya sister
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girl... you are toooo cute.. I'm soo happy your my little sister you make my day easyer to get thro... cuz your such a little goof ball.. hugs!! thank you!!!
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i knowww i am!!! lol!!! i'm just the BESTEST person in the whole world!! haha!!!!
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awww such a sad write and i see where your feelings are coming from.......... i personally have never been engaged but i know what it feels like to lose someone that you love so much but then they turn around and do that to you after you tried to keep in touch.... this was a great write and it makes me think of how strong a woman like you can be!! hang iin there your little sister is still here to back you up through any hard times..
Ciara
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Ufz , too much smashing and breaking.
really one of prettier piece, i read today. it's beautiful
well, Time is a finer solution
by
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the poet of hearts and beautiful words
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That is true pain! I am so sorry, and bless you for having the strength to work through this...beautiful poem.
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the emotions are great
i love it.
its so sad, yet i cant stop reading it.
:] good job!
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thanks dear!!
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the pain and the frustration trickles down the page and threatens to overwhelm the reader. Brava, brava!
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Thank you dear.... It is real frustration so that is proably why!!
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my favourite lines were the beginnin it was eye catching.not 2 long, just precise
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im glad you liked it hun.. thank you for taking the time to read it over!!!
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wow
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"Why can't he just leave me alone, Hasn't he hurt me enough."
that is a sad, sad line... this is filled with many, so many emotions... and i can't stop reading.. great
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... thanks hun!!!
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There is ever so much emotion put into this write, it is very sad indeed though, please keep writting, and smile
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Thank you so much!!!
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This is such an emotional write and the story behind it is so... I dunno. It's just sad
I really don't know what I would do in this situation, it must be hard for you. So BIG hug to you 
this was a wonderful piece I liked it a lot. Hang in there
Blessings,
~Michaela~
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Thank you my dear!!! hugs
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