hey hey my little butterfly, how pretty are your wings when you glide I could stare at you all day when you go by, how I wish I could flow with you all across the sky, my beautiful wonderful cuddle of joy.....my little butterfly
A contest entry
- 24 hr. Cute Quote & Pic Inspired Quickie by poet2angels.
575 points, ended February 10, 5 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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More beans please
Hey hey my little butterbeans, how pretty your shape in the boiling water, I could gobble you up all day when you are cooked, I should invite Bullwinkle over for a bowl from his paradise forest in Ireland... my butterbeans, my yummy legumes of joy -
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A sweet write. One suggestion, I think that if you add some line breaks after each sentence will help the flow a little better. Thanks for sharing, and Congratulations on the HM!
Sarah
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Thank You
thank you i really appreciate it, i know i should have put line breaks and i should have added a picture, i should have read instructions better i am kicking myself now, but hey it's my first contest and to get 4th place and have my poem noticed and won its a big accomplishment i am so excited thank you agian very much,
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How sweet...I love the ending.
TY for entering
Lynda
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Thank You
Thank You for letting me enter your contest, i wish i had read instructions better i didn't realize i had to add a picture, and i should have added line breaks but for what its worth to still have my poem as the top 5 is a big accomplishment i am very very excited this is really awesome even though i do not get money just to have won a poetry contest and get my name out there is amazing, i cannot thank you enough, i have about 69 more poems to post, i want your opinon should i post them or enter them in contests and if i post them can i still use them in contests? please let me know thank you -
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You should try and find contests that fit your poems ....before you post them because not all contests allow prewrites . I never do...
So search the contests and then find the one that fits the poem you have written ..
I will try to watch for your new poems and comment
good luck! Keep writing
Lynda
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If I say pleaseeee, would you allow me to post a prewrite?? C'mon, you know you want to say yes....
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awwwwwww, just for you, Tim, I will open the contest back up and allow prewrites, or maybe post another contest....whatever....
and ummmmm if you keep talking like that, I will say yes to any request
Flirting will get YOU everywhere...
Lynda
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Everywhere eh... care to describe the meaning of your sentence please oh Poet2angels lol
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you may take that any which way you like ....I meant it quite literally, sweet looneyeclipse
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