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Jilted Jitters Justification

I do believe a wanton woman deceived
Became overwrought, thinking better,then not.
Committed murder in madness acting haphazard.
I suspect Samantha Ellesworth in a state accurse,
Has stabbed,strangled, poisoned and worse.

She became irate at my spouses tirade
Lost all composure laying him six foot under
And this lemon won't make lemonade.

Quite Seriously,
Lady Flintworthy

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  • Sandi Alford gold member
    February 13

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    How dare you speak of such atrocities against my good name! I'll see you hang.....

    Samantha exits with fearful pangs


  • yukitosumi
    February 12

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    I would not put it past the cow to have stabbed him.

    Just as I would not put it past YOU to have poisoned poor Daddy.

    I rest assured knowing that the truth will come out.

    You will be hearing from my attorney,
    Lady Carla Flintworthy.


  • pastiche
    February 11

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    Now this is what sets you apart as a true Lady of the Manor, not some little lady of the house!
    You make up your mind. You say it. The rest is mere detail.

    Three cheers!!!
    Louis


  • XxGoldenxXDawnxX
    February 10
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    That is a logical deduction Lady Flintworthy.


  • Malabu
    February 9

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    wow wee susie...did you write this with a smile on your face?
    this is fabulous
    a who dunnit ...done write
    get it?

    EXCELLENT!
    mally


  • Tirrell
    February 9

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    There is a thought... It could also be a jealous rage that has done this, but feel it may be more sinister than this. --M. S.

  • Bob Fox
    February 9
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    Lol

    My such intrigue. Perhaps a novel is in the poets book of life?


    • suseann
      February 10

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      Oh,I thought this was a novel. Ops! Or a novel contest idea anyway. Thanks Bob. Want to co-author? Life in the big apple might just qualify you as more of a specialist in writing one.

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