Down my chin the honey drips,
slowly trickles down my breast...
Your open mouth lingers for the taste
of sweet on sweat.
Your hungry lips move on my skin
tauntingly down my electric flesh
savoring the essence of lust
to the spot I like the best
Ambers from our fire burn
Feel the heat rise from coitus
steamy passions rise above
all reason in thoughts
Moaning together our bodies move,
two bare upon the rug
Silently I hope the morning
will never come.
A contest entry
- Sensual, Erotica, Love and Happiness Contest by MYsecondchance.
700 points, ended July 9, 26 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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wow this is hot!
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Sensual. I like the vocabulary you chose for the poem.
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wow this is definitely one of the better erotic pieces I have read. what I liked in this was not what everyone else does: includes some actual emotion to it not just sex that it there was such profound imagery and description.
I really liked the idea of the honey.
You misspelled Essence, there's a double space after the third stanza, and two spaces after "the" in the second 0line in the forth stanza, those were the only errors I saw, but overall a very very well done poem thanks so much for entering it
By the way whats is a "coitus" -
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Thank you for your comments! I'm glad you liked this piece...this is a definition of coitus I found for you-coitus-physical union of male and female genitalia accompanied by rhythmic movements.
Says it all I guess!
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wonderful write
WOOT AND A HOOT
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Hot, but sweet! The first stanza was especially good (as well as graphic!).
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