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Victoria's fires

fire that burns late into the night
so far nearly 173 people have died
this fire hase cause pain and lost of life
the pain that all of Austrailia has to deal with,
this time good people will fight,
while 4000 and more today mourn the lost of lives,

this fire remembers me of Ash Wensenday,
the lives lost,
Yet our soilders,
Fire fighters move on,
fighting to keep victora alvie,
and saving lives of poeple who needed the most,



We have the bravest fighters,
these guys are not trained,
help the hounr of there township,
filling water and pumps onthe back,
Ute loads of water,
To save the rest of what they have left,
hepling to see wat they can acomplish,


Austrailia we mourn,
today look at the lives what weve lost,
timeless hour for the fighters,
the time they need,
battling the flames and wind,
just remember who had died
who has lost a life
who is dealing with it
this isnt just life
this is a accident
that hasnt ment to be

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