I.., Dr.Emmett Farquar M.D. P.H.D. L.M.O.P..
Personal physician of our victim and friend.
After careful deliberation in this investigation
Submit my submission and my final decision.
And on this you can rest and depend.
All signs point to a culprit of sizable incisors
Vampire, new neighbor, Louis Arquette.
At your service respectfully,
Dr. Emmett Farquar Esquire
In a list
A contest entry
- The Murder Mystery Whodunnit Game by XxGoldenxXDawnxX.
480 points, ended March 2, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Mr Farquar, with three different aspects of murder, how on earth have you deduced the ultimate 'pinpricks' to his neck was what did poor Albert in? I think you are jumping to conclutions, or are trying your best to steer the blame from yourself. hmmmm going to ponder more.
I too love the title very ingenious! and a really comical look at this character, well done!
Best wishes!
Sincerly Samantha
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Do you really think so, Emmet? Should I lock my doors??
Best,
Carla
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Whasssup, Doc?
Given up medicine in favour of fairy tales?
Science fiction replacing science fact?
Oh, surely you can do better...
(with your deductions, I mean - not the poem. )
Louis
Subtle comedy, exquisitely put! Congrats and best of luck in the contest.
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AHA.. the plot thickens.. you are not the only one who suspects the vampire lol. Great work.
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lol im still laffin at the title...and the l.m.o.p,
and are the neighbors available to profess?
another fabulous write my friend..
mal
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I see...
I still feel that all will be know later, and that the murderer shall expose themself with by them.
But feel there is much to I may agree with here...
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Great Gatsby! Expose him self? I hope not. So in addition to commiting murder he or she is a flasher? Oh my! Now such senseless cruelty I simplely can not abide. But must admit. The thought of a confessor in a trench coat running necked through the house is a funny thought. Ha!
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