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Intermission

Missing image
lost in the shadow
of silence and thought
minds cross the bridge
differently experienced
to meet by flickering light

peace grows with rhythm
when measures of time
capture moments grasped
as reflections that pause
interludes of reprieve

measures rhythm as spaces
where thoughts fall shadows
and pauses are experienced
as interludes of light



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A Finclo

Photo credit: http://www.pdphoto.org/PictureDetail.php?pg=8381

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  • Aesthete2000 gold member
    February 10

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    "interludes of reprieve"

    Your words shine light
    on the subtle pauses...
    let the mind turn focus
    on effects and causes.

    Well expressed, Frans.

    M-C


    • FransB gold member
      February 10
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      Thank you Aesthete2000

      You have a wonderful manner of encouragement. Blessings Frans


  • rite
    February 10

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    By the power of mind our electro chemical system opens the gateway to realms where matter matters not. Breaking through the walls sustained by frequencies of the dimensions that hold us captive. Outside which different freedoms and prisons await our choice. In these uncharted spheres intuition is our guide. The Light of which you wrote. Thank you for creating and sharing this most intriguing expression. I enjoyed being on this page to read and ponder. Take care.

    • FransB gold member
      February 10
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      Your

      comments are always refreshing and worth the 'pondering'. You have added another dimension. Thank you. Blessings. Frans


  • myrataal silver member
    February 10

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    I simply love this form ...

    and as I said: it may become a very effective way to catharsis in the therapeutic program, when administered to its fullest!

    This poem once again bring to light the wondrous transparency that come with reflection; the vagueness of thoughts obscured and often overshadowed by communication gaps, becomes illuminated by the shared experience, albeit momentarily, when mind and mind meet within the spiritual realm.

    Wonderfully done. Thank you, Frans.

    Love
    Myra

    • FransB gold member
      February 10
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      For me the Finclo

      creates so much possibilities. Thank you for giving time. I look forward to working with you over the weekend. Frans

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