Sparkle eyes, my pretty one,
Like oceans shining in the sun.
With warmth that spreads through waters deep,
So I float safely as I sleep.
And when the breakers swell and rise,
I know the kindness in those eyes,
Will calm that rough and stormy sea,
That sometimes finds it’s place in me.
Fingers, lazy, trailing in,
The waves that spread across my skin,
While bridged by touch and breathing light
We drift together through the night.
Now I extend my heart to you,
Your helpless slave in all I do.
As you have made a love in me,
As strong and reckless as the sea.
Author notes
This is for my beautiful boy who has eyes like the sea! Do you think he'll like it? eek!
Scrufflet
Option 2
I love you AngelsExodus
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Aww... I think he will love it.
My bf has eyes like those, gorgeous in that wonderful deep blue shade..... *starts trailing off her sentences and thinking of her bf....* XD
.... Oh yea, the poem, sorry. ^_^;
I loved the third stanza;
"Fingers, lazy, trailing in,
The waves that spread across my skin,
While bridged by touch and breathing light
We drift together through the night."
Beautiful poetry, wonderful imagery, and all together a lovely poem for your boy. Thank you for your entry.
Sorry I didn't comment for a while by the way, I've been really busy.
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awww no problem. And thanks for the comment!
HAPPY VALENTINES!
xxxx
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