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What Else But Revenge?

Maybe if you'd heard me
At the non-existant part of night
You wouldn't be so apt to speak
Maybe if you saw what I saw
You'd be stunned into a silence
That lasted for a whole year
Maybe you'd be afraid as you have made me afraid
But...
You were peacefully dreaming
And you know,
I had half a mind to wake you
But that alone could've killed you
And I couldn't have that
This needs to be slow
This needs to be deep
This needs to be...
Agonizing

But...
No need to worry
Revenge has a long memory

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The Meaning of Night

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  • TheStupidLamb
    February 9
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    Revenge is sweet, as they say.


  • Atrophya
    February 9
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    i want revenge in a way but, there's no point...

  • hmmmmm.....i like it. i'm not necessarily sure what it's literally about but it reminds me of how i'm awake till 4 in the morning just about every night and i hate being stuck like that and i wanna wake someone up but then i just decide to let them sleep...neways, though, good job. i liked it.