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Dying Flame

in anger, he swoops like a demon after its prey.
she turns trying to run away;
cornered as his anger explodes
his hands squeezing taking away the right to breath
locked in panic looking back in silent plead
never to forget those ice blue eyes filled with hate
not fighting back giving up
all that’s left; just a dying flame

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  • Thanks for your link here.Enjoying your writting


  • charlesrhice
    February 10
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    a victum

    a victum is a living crime only GOD can save a victum his namme is still Jesus


  • ckwriter69
    February 9
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    What a picture this creates. Keep writing and thanks for sharing your emotion.