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A Bright Full Moon Shines Like A Strong Full Heart

Valorous, bold and vigorous shines tonight's full moon
Resolution resides with passion and lust your heart,
my safe invisible cocoon

Two dreamers perpetuated by an unrivalled reality of love ,
For each other and the bounty of Mother Earth,
all around , below and above

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  • SydneyRae16
    March 6
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    beautiful!! i loved it!!


  • crimson-river
    March 6

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    OKAY

    I like the cocoon analogy...
    There isn't much here though to comment on and it seems - idk - not long enough...