Even if I now
Only once was to embrace you
I would love you so
A contest entry
- Wanted: Zen Poetry by Cynthia Gaines.
2100 points, ended February 20, 2009, 60 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Haiku, Senryu, or Tanka! by TheSpiralGenerator.
1050 points, ended February 19, 2009, 39 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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wonderful expression of the sense of longing and desire here, this has a good flow when read, a sincere feeling to the words, open small plain words the do a lot...PK
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Beautiful Sentiments...
A rare heart shines in this haiku, poet!! 
Thank you for your entry, and good luck in the contest!! Peace, xx Cyn 
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Aww... this is really beautiful, I know this feeling.
Amazing write, and good luck in the contest.
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So much beauty in so few words...
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Absolutely beautiful. This took my breath away. Thanks for entering, and good luck!
-Sadien
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How beautiful and delicate your words. Very touching an embrace your words convey.
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