Wounded angel lost her wing;
the storm crashing above,
How delicate her feathers were;
the wings of such pure love.
She felt the sorrow within-
of her lost, tormented soul,
His love for her - so true,
would it one day make her whole?
Go hastily and surround her,
with your gratifying embrace-
Kiss her lips ever so softly;
wipe the tears from her face.
She needs your deep touch-
to be able to soar once more,
Share with her all your love,
as she sits by the ocean shore.
Stare deeply into her eyes-
hold her hands with compassion,
Tell her, she will always be;
your one and only passion.
© February 9, 2009
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- Alone.... by Lady Michaella.
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oooooh tht picture is awesome
so powerful
thankyou very much for the entry
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Very beautiful words to read, went so very well with the picture
All the best to you
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Thank you, Hun. I always enjoy your comments.
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Wow that is such a sad piece, excellently written as always, so emotional and profound.
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Thank you.
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i love this. great work here.. super original:
and a really beautiful and sad poem. perfectly suited to the prompt
and the added picture there is a great touch to it
Thanks for entering my contest!! And best of luck!!
-Lemon Bee-
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Thank you, Hun. Always enjoy bringing a smile to someones face. Thanks again for your wonderful comments.
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